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I just came down from the mountain to find you.
I’ve been cooped up in my mind for a bit too long.
I wanted just to come down and see your face;
Come down from the mountain and sing you this song.
It would clear up my clouded mind to feel your heart.
It would soften my calloused hands to touch your skin.
If I came down from the mountain to hear your voice,
I would regain my soul and sing again.

In my mind I can walk along the shore;
I can see the seagulls interrupt the sunset;
I’d be with you and walk for hours and hours,
The ocean the backdrop for our presence.

But on the mountain I cant walk along the shore,
And on the mountain I cant be with you;
My mind isn’t the place I really want to be,
I want to be down there and near you.

It would clear my clouded mind to feel your heart.
It would soften my calloused hands to touch your skin.
If I came down from the mountain to hear your voice,
I would regain my soul and sing again.

…But on the mountain I cant feel your heart;
And on the mountain I cant touch your skin;
On the mountain I cant hear your voice,
My soul is lost until I see you again.
My soul is lost until I see you again.

…So I just came down from the mountain to find you.
I’ve been cooped up in my mind for a bit too long.
I wanted just to come down and see your face;
Come down from the mountain and sing you this song.
:iconramuel:
Yeah I wrote this the other day. I guess since its the lyrics of the song, it goes in lyrical... right?

Please comment, I put alot of time into this.
Yeah this song is dedicated to my gf. ( panther-nora , if you havent figured it out)
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:iconazeriel:
wonderful brother it truly is... you time and effort doesn't go unnoticed *giggles @ the fawnin ladies* ahhh so cute how the lass's get with romance.... ;) hehehe well well done! :)
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:iconramuel:
Thanks... All the girls did say they liked it alot... including the one I care most about. heh
Girls love it when you write stuff for them...
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:iconazeriel:
:) It's all about the one you love! ;) Good job!
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~ahmose Feb 20, 2004  Hobbyist Writer
very beautiful!! I can tell you put a lot of time into it.
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:iconramuel:
Thanks, Ahmose.
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~ahmose Feb 21, 2004  Hobbyist Writer
no prob
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~Prehistoricdanc Feb 20, 2004  Hobbyist General Artist
I like it a lot :D good job :heart: :hug:
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~Prehistoricdanc Feb 21, 2004  Hobbyist General Artist
anytime :D
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:iconrina-ran:
That was wonderful! makes me wish I had a bf too...such a great poem/song coming from a fantastic poet/writer...
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